Remembering Your Present Stories: The writing blog of Stacy Duplease, a 34+ year journal keeper and writer of nonfiction and fiction.
Showing posts with label Novel Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Novel Writing. Show all posts
Monday, June 6, 2016
Refining Book 1 of the Cirtolia Series and Writing in Composition Books
CURRENT WRITING PROGRESS
Well, I have been changing the title of this first book as often as I change my clothes. Therefore, I have decided to keep it blank for now. It's probably safer that way.
I have been writing like crazy for the last 5 days and have discovered a new way to write. I am now writing by hand in Composition Books. I have filled one already of 100 pages and am working on the second one. Hence, I have 22,500 words written so far. Each composition book is about 21,000 words for the size of my handwriting.
I am not editing. Nor am I typing it up as I go. I am just writing at this point.
If I keep going at this pace, I should finish writing the first draft of book 1 by the end of August.
I would love to tell you what it is about, but I am still staying to figure it out for myself. I have a general idea, but am writing at this point to help me figure out what exactly this book and series will be about. We shall see.
I will be quite as I write like crazy and will not blog every day. But, I will sure try to make it count when I do.
USING COMPOSITION BOOKS TO WRITE
Using composition books to write is a whole new medium for me. (Medium as in a way of writing.) I have heard of others using them, but I didn't think it would be appealing for me. However, when I realized I really need to handwrite my first drafts, I decided to go on a search last week to see what I might find.
Needless to say, I headed to Walmart, but my car took me to the dollar store here in town. I figured it was on the way to Walmart, so it wouldn't hurt to look. I went to the store trying to find spiral notebooks smaller than letter size of 8.5 x 11. The spirals they had would work, but I wanted something else. But, I had no idea what that something else was.
As I squat on the aisle, looking on a tiny shelf of writing supplies near the floor, I found a composition book. The size of 9.25 x 7.5 had appeal and I loved the thick and hard front and back cover. Plus, it laid flat for easy writing and for later when I have to type up everything. Moreover, it would store nicely and not take up too much room. Huh. Those reasons appealed to me. Well, for a buck, how could I go wrong? I bought three just in case. I know when I start writing, I go tend to write fast and in large amounts. There isn't anything more frustrating than getting on a writing kick and you realize you don't have another blank book of any kind to write on, so you have to stop and go to the store. Thus, three seemed a good amount.
I started using the composition book and within a couple of hours, I was... In. Love. It seemed as though it were exactly what I needed. Hallelujah! Phew.
By the end of the next day, I realized I was hooked on writing in composition books.
I have since shopped around and found them in town for 80 cents. Hence, it will cost me about $20 with pens and paper to write the first draft of this book and the books hereafter. I can handle the cost, that is for sure.
I really recommend writing with composition books if you are a writer or a journal keeper.
Now, pardon me, please. It's time to get writing.
Wednesday, October 7, 2015
The Title and Cover for My NaNoWriMo 2015 Book and Planning Progress Update
TITLE AND COVER ART
This is the temporary front cover and book title for my #NaNoWriMo book:
Earthbound Adoption
The Kharis Tales, Book 1
{Picture on this book cover is by: Image courtesy of Idea go atFreeDigitalPhotos.net}
CURRENT WRITING PROJECT STATUS
Yesterday I began planning for my NaNoWriMo 2015 novel and I spent several hours working on it. Wouldn't it figure that I spent all that time--only to realize it was for book two of the series?
Well, the good news is that I have the skeleton of an outline for Book 2, which will save me some time and it helps me to know where I am going in the story so I can stay on track. I did, however, get a quite rough skeleton put together for Book 1 as well. Therefore, it was quite the productive day all in all, even though things didn't quite work out the way I expected. (But, when do they?)
I'm using this resource to help me plan for NaNo and all of the future books of "The Kharis Tales" Series:
http://smile.amazon.com/Outlining-Novel-Workbook-Step---Step-ebook/dp/B00P72KQI2/ref=sr_1_3?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1444236910&sr=1-3&keywords=km+weiland
It's about time for me to start my day of planning for book one and getting the outline more detailed. I cannot wait to see what I accomplish today on the project. It's rather captivated me already and it's only day two. In fact, I only slept about three hours last night since I kept planning Book 1 in my head. Now, I just need to get it down on the page and hope I didn't forget anything.
National Novel Writing Month is 24 days away and I hope to be ready to write at least 50,000 words. Truthfully, I hope to get more than that accomplished, but we shall see.
Wednesday, April 8, 2015
WHAT SHOULD I WRITE? (AM WRITING FOR CAMP NANOWRIMO)
WHAT SHOULD I WRITE?
For over 15 years, I have wrestled with this question and I keep asking it,thinking I have answered it, only to ask it all over again. Repeat. And repeat.
Look at how many times I have changed my writing genre and ideas on this blog. It's full of hundreds of ideas I have not followed through on or finished. All of my writing seems to have been for a season.
However, I keep coming back to a few core values that I know I should write about:
1 Journaling
2 Prayer Journaling
3 Christian Living
4 About the history of the USA
5 About the politics of the USA
6 About current events
7 The War on Terror
8 Fantasy/speculative fiction
9 Fiction writing to show #1-7.
Now, I think I have figured out how to encompass #1-9.
Hence, it's the fantasy or speculative fiction series of "KRAIMORA" I have decided to try to write.
Stay tuned.
I am writing it for CAMP NaNoWriMo.
Also, I will continue to write about current events, prayer journaling, Christian Living, the Bible, and praying for our world on this blog.
For over 15 years, I have wrestled with this question and I keep asking it,thinking I have answered it, only to ask it all over again. Repeat. And repeat.
Look at how many times I have changed my writing genre and ideas on this blog. It's full of hundreds of ideas I have not followed through on or finished. All of my writing seems to have been for a season.
However, I keep coming back to a few core values that I know I should write about:
1 Journaling
2 Prayer Journaling
3 Christian Living
4 About the history of the USA
5 About the politics of the USA
6 About current events
7 The War on Terror
8 Fantasy/speculative fiction
9 Fiction writing to show #1-7.
Now, I think I have figured out how to encompass #1-9.
Hence, it's the fantasy or speculative fiction series of "KRAIMORA" I have decided to try to write.
Stay tuned.
I am writing it for CAMP NaNoWriMo.
Also, I will continue to write about current events, prayer journaling, Christian Living, the Bible, and praying for our world on this blog.
Wednesday, February 11, 2015
AN INDEX CARD STYLE WRITING NOTEBOOK AND JOURNAL
AN INDEX CARD STYLE WRITING NOTEBOOK AND JOURNAL (02.11.2015.W.)
Yesterday, I shared how I am trying a new writing system of outlining and using index cards to do so. I figured I would share my progress and my system so far as I write my epic love story of patriotism, "AUTUMN BLAZE."
I read how some outline a little and how some outline a great deal. Part it depends on your learning style. Well, what does that mean for me? Since I realize I am a visual and a hands-on, touchy feely learner both rolled into one, and I have tried every other method of writing, I decided to go all in with the index cards for outlining and to use as my writing notebook and journal. I am writing everything on index cards.
As of late yesterday afternoon, I had 133 index cards filled. My husband and I bought 500 over the weekend. In one day, I used 133 cards. Uh-oh. This brought on two challenges:
1 I needed more cards.
2 How on earth would I organize them?
I scratched my head and looked around in my house to see what I had:
It's a plastic shoe box or cd/dvd box. Perfect.
I will carry it around with me everywhere, not caring how silly I may look. It's practical and it's for what I do for a living. Some carry a brief case or book bag or laptop bag. Not me. I now carry a plastic shoe box. (Chuckling.) It's so me. Silly.
Now, I know me. I am a klutz and there is a good chance I will drop the box or it will slide off the seat as I drive. That would not be good to have them scatter, get mixed up, and possibly land in a puddle or in my coffee. Therefore, it's a plastic shoe box with handles to lock down the lid. Whew.
I'm moving shortly and all of my stuff may have to be in storage for weeks to months, so I need to make sure to have extra black pens on me, along with some color pens for color coding. Hence, the zippered pencil bag.
There is another angle. You'll see how I folded a couple over to make index tabs and I kept the unopened packages in there as well, so it's all in one place. Easy breezy. Simple. Useable. Organized.
As you can see, I got 600 more blank cards from the store already.
So far, I am blown away by how much I am enjoying the system. It's working really well for me. Each thought, idea, plot point, character, settings, etc. gets its own card. I can shuffle them as needed. If I get an idea for something later in the book, I note it on a card, place it where it should go, return to where I was and carry on. Before, I would have to search for those ideas in my writing notebook and I may forget to do so or it would be hard to find. This way, when I get to that point later, it's already there, and as I review in the morning about what I wrote previously, and where I am headed, it's already there.
Or, if I get an idea and have no idea where to put it, I have a section for that as well, along with an Old Writing section of ideas discarded or that I changed. I have a section for that as well in my index file system. I always keep every idea, for I may need it later, and often times do.
I have a simple one word outline for each of the different parts of the book, I have that in sentence form as well in another section in my index file system for that as well, along with my premise sentence and paragraph, back cover material, etc. It's all there. I have character sketches and character question and answers, etc. I have a section on backstory.
It's all in my shoe box. And, all of it, and I mean ALL of it, is easy to find with this system. I have never been able to say that in 14 years of writing. Never ever.
What was I will thinking before?
Whoever says you can't find stuff easily with this system has never tried this.
I am writing, possibly, a book of 1,000 pages. I need and must be as organized as possible and not lose any, or forget, ideas or facts and figures from my story (who's who and what's what and when and how and why). So, the worst part of my system may be I have to carry two or three shoe boxes. Okay. So? I have no problem with that. This organization is making it easier to write. I am freed.
I will keep you updated.
So far, this may be the best story I have ever written and it is easy and is a joy to do. (Yay!)
Tuesday, February 10, 2015
WRITING NOTEBOOK: VISUAL LEARNING AND INDEX CARDS APPROACH
Writing Notebook for February 10, 2015, Tuesday
Over the weekend, I read the book, "Outlining Your Novel: Map Your Way to Success" by K.M. Weiland.
I've read part of it before. I really wanted to see if outlining was my thing or if it could be my thing. That's about as far as it got. I've been a serial pantser for years and have tried to write hundreds of books--nonfiction and fiction (novels). At no avail. I've been all over the place. I've tried to commit and it just hasn't worked. So, it was with this book, when I first read it. However, "Outlining Your Novel" this weekend took on whole new meaning to me.
I find it interesting how one word, sentence, paragraph, page, section, chapter can finally get something in you to flip on and you have the proverbial AHA! moment. The light bulb comes on and you finally get it. You are no longer in the dark.
I also find it interesting how it's usually absolute common sense, and is usually something you have thought and/or heard before, but for some reason, this time, the way the words were arranged, something clicked and your brain was able to file the information and retrieve old information and combine it into a new file. Then, you can finally do something with it. That's what "Outlining Your Novel" did for me this weekend.
I count a million blessings for this book and for K.M. Weiland.
I think, after fourteen years, I finally get it. (Sad. Way too late. But, the timing will be perfect, I have no doubt.)
MY LIGHT BULB MOMENT ABOUT WRITING AND OUTLINING
What was it that created the four by four over the head type of light bulb moment when my slow light finally came on--and at full brightness? It's when she talked about how outlining works really well, through color note cards on a bulletin board, for visual learners. I thought: "Huh. I'm a visual learner."
This took me aback and flashbacks of junior and senior English in high school came back to me and using index cards to write. I remember that was when I grew in leaps and bounds as a writer. I went from getting C's and B's to A's in a short amount of time. Why did I stop? After all, if it ain't broke, don't fix it.
I searched my brain and my heart for an answer and quickly discovered an answer that hit close to home and was a painful and in-your-face answer: I went against my firm belief of:
If you ever discover you're taking the easy way, stop, and run quickly in the opposite direction. After all, the easy road is never the best road to take. You think it will save time, and it might to get the first objective accomplished, but it doesn't get the full picture objective accomplished, and it usually takes longer and it isn't your best work.
I've taken the easy way with writing.
Weiland also talks about how if you haven't outlined and used note cards as a visual learner, you may have several projects you tried, but were never able to brought through to completion.
Ouch. Double ow.
She had my attention.
So, bless my husband, I looked over at him after this rolled around in my head for a day and a half, and announced: "We need to go to the store and get me some index cards."
B (hubby): "Why?"
Me: "For my latest novel."
B: "Haven't you tried that before?" (Not out of complaint or criticism, but out of a genuine heart to get to know my reasoning.)
Me: "No. You're thinking for my art journaling. I haven't tried note cards for writing scone high school."
B: "Oh. Let's go. I need to pick up a couple of things anyway." He didn't hesitate.
Need I mention how we were in our sweats and it was almost dark--and Sunday night? B humors me. He will do anything he can to support my craft--even as I have spun my wheels on project after project for all of these years.
So, we went to the store. I stared at the index cards and said, "I have no idea how many I need." I grabbed a couple.
B looked at the price and said, "Well, for that price, you might as well pick up several and I can always pick you up some more on the way home if I need."
I grabbed five packages of 100, and we spent $0.59 per package. And, I said, "I doubt I need all of these, but if I do, I would sure appreciate you picking up more." I really didn't imagine filling in more cards.
DAY 1 OF USING INDEX CARDS (MONDAY, FEBRUARY 09, 2015)
It took me three-quarters of the day yesterday to finish reading the book, "Outlining Your Novel." I seemed to highlight most of the book, let me add. So, then I started to put what I learned into practice.
Goosebumps just ran up and down my arms and back. (No joke.)
When B came home from work, he asked me how things went. I told him, "I need more index cards, but still have no idea how many I will need."
He stared at me. I can only imagine what went through his head about his nutty wife.
"B, my writing has been transformed and revolutionized. I've come up with what I think might be my best idea yet (and I thought how it could be a Great American novel if I do it right). I am not ready to talk about it too much, but I am reading 'GONE WITH THE WIND,' 'THE THORN BIRDS,' AND 'ATLAS SHRUGGED,' if that tells you anything." (But, I thought maybe I should add "THE WINDS OF WAR" and "WAR AND REMEMBRANCE" as well.
Bless him. He just stared at me.
I think he's been told that with every project and he hasn't, and didn't say, "Sure." Even though he probably thought it and I sure don't blame him if he did.
Last night, I explained the concept of the book with him and he gave me a slight look that he could tell this really was different and he was curious to see what, if anything, happened with this late great new idea.
"The index card system has changed things for me." I explained to B earlier.
B: "How?"
Me: "I can see my thoughts in a shorter form and can organize them through moving one card to another place if I need."
B: "You can shuffle your ideas and writing in other words."
Me: "Yeah. It's hands-on. You know me. I'm a visual learned. This really helps me see it, my writing and ideas. But, it also is hands-on. You know me. I learn best through visual learning and through doing it."
B:" That's kinesthetic learning--and yeah. That's you." He nodded.
Me: "Yeah! That's it."
B: "That makes sense. I'll get you more cards tomorrow."
Me: "Thanks. I've already gone through almost 100."
He got a smirk and nodded.
Why haven't I done this all along? What a fool I've been. I think I've finally found how to write, so I can actually start and complete a project. I also think because of it, I've come up with an epic patriotic love story.
Mind you, I will go against all the rules publishers say. I am going to write a massive novel for my first real book. It will be around 1000-1100 pages. But, if it's tight writing, it will sell. If it's an engaging work that stirs up the emotions and grabs the heart and mind, it will be well received. But, that isn't why I'm writing it.
This novel, I'm writing because I want to read a book like this.
So, stay tuned.
It's called, "AUTUMN BLAZE."
(Image credit: Stacy Duplease and Remembering Your Present, LLC 2014-2015.)
(Image credit: Stacy Duplease and Remembering Your Present, LLC 2014-2015.)
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